In the comment box, write me a paragraph about what you would do, if you were a superhero.
Try to think about; what your powers would be, how you would use them, where you would go, would you have an enemy, would you have a sidekick, what would your greatest mission be, would everyone know you are a superhero?
I will be particularly impressed by people who can show me some of the skills we practised in our writing last tem. Can you...
- include some adjectives
- use a thesaurus to find some better vocabulary
- use some connectives to extend your sentences (becuase, so, if, but)
- use a time connective to start a sentence
- use an adverb to start a sentence
- use a ?, an ! or some "
If I were a super hero!
ReplyDeleteI am Lightning the super hero and my power is to go invisible, invincible and I can fly. My worst enemy is Captain Mischief the evil mastermind. He is so evil he would kill everything in his path, bomb a city , hypnotize a town into becoming evil. My side kick Thunder, helps me defeat Captain Mischief and his assistant Dark Man.
My biggest mission ever was to get back the Crown Jewels stolen by Captain Mischief and Dark Man. Their lair is in the Himalayan mountains.
Wow! What great super powers!
DeleteHow did you get the jewels back?
Perhaps you could use a luckily/ unluckily sentence to tell me?
If I were a super hero I would be called Superman.
ReplyDeleteIf I were a superhero my super powers would ice breath laser vision and flying also x-ray vision.
In the day I walk about and if somebody calls me from any were in the world but only if they say what the problem is so the evil supermen and woman don’t trick me.
If I were a superhero nobody would know my secret I’d not even other Superhero s.
If I were a superhero my enemy is evil supermen and woman.
What a lot of powers. Could you list them again using your punctuation carefully?
DeleteI like the idea of somebody calling you. What do they use to do this? Could you use a time sentence starter to tell me?
They call me by shouting superman and the problem.
Deletemy super powers are ice breath, Laser vision, flying also x ray vision.
If I were a superhero I’d be called Blue Falcon.
ReplyDeleteI would have a green light saber to kill the enemy.
My enemy is Brain matter who uses his brain to kill people.
My sidekick is Red Falcon who’s sidekick is Green Falcon.
My Power is eye rays.
Brain Matter sounds very evil! How does he use his brain to kill people?
DeleteCould you use some connectives in your explanation?
Brain Matter looks at them in a weird way, then they get killed.
DeleteIf I were a superhero I would be called ?????. My powers would be to have super speed and fast healing also my enemy would be a guy called ???? who is like me but he gets tiered more quicker.
ReplyDeleteI wonder why he gets tired more quickly? Do you have a special item of food which gives you more power than him?
DeleteWhat was your most terrifying mission? Could you use some time connectives to tell me?
My name would be the orange falcon .
DeleteMy most dangerous mision would be to chop a bomb in half.
If I was a superhero my powers would be fly and lasers also lightning pic people up with out touching them and strength also my name would be wonder will. And my greatest success was when I through a colossal bomb in to space that was going to destroy the world! By caching the bomb then I through it into space futhurmore I only am a super hero at night.
ReplyDeleteGoodness me, I don't think I would want to catch a bomb!
DeleteDo you have any enemies? Could you use commas to list them?
I like the word furthermore
DeleteSofia the night time superhero!
ReplyDeleteIf I was a superhero…….. my super powers would be clicking, and the problem would be a little easier!
My name would be super Sofia. I would fly around looking for problems .If not then my side kick (Bob) would see if there was would see if there was any problems.
I wonder how clicking would save the world? Could you use some connectives to explain?
DeleteWell done for using an !
I have almost all the powers in the world! Because whatever I think just comes to me.
DeleteBeatrice
ReplyDeleteIF I WERE A SUPERHEO……
I would be called Bea the Brilliant Invisible women daughter.
My super powers would be to be able to walk through absolutely every think.
I would be known as top of the class as day by night I was everyone’s hero.
My sidekick would be called Katy the fabulous who’s power was to lift almost anything which is very handy in missions
My enemy would be Kit Kat the evil kitten who dream is too take over the world by his adorable look and can hepatize you to follow his orders but he’s never ever going to get away with that.
Normally I would go on little missions like returning people after floods have swiped them out of the village, or save someone one from drowning in the river Avon. But my most amazing mission yet was when a group of superheroes including superman, wonder women, green lanterns and batman are under control of Kit Kat.
Wow, how did you save all of those superheroes? Could you include some speech when you tell me? And don't forget they need capital letters for their names!
DeleteI didn'nt finish in time so let me continue.......
DeleteSo I slowly creped behide KitKat in stealth mode then carefully as ever I would ever be unhooked the keys from KitKat's belt.Sielntly I unlocke every single cage which contained the superheroes Batman was bonkers, Wonder Women was wonderful, Superman was super and the Green Lanterns jumped with glee.
My secret hideout is a invbisble trree house which only opens which only opens with a sample my blood I know gory.It has all the luxurys you ever wanted.
The rest you will you will all find out in time when I make the front page in the newspaper.
Bea
If I were a superhero
ReplyDeleteIf I was a superhero I would be called Beef the great midnight superhero. My sidekick would by Harrold the great.Harrold is asuper pea .
My enemy would be Captain Minecraft. My best mission would be to save the world from distruction by Captain Minecraft
I'm glad you can save the world! How would you stop Captain Minecraft. Could you use some time words to tell me?
DeleteI can stop Captain Minecraft by setting a trap which will drop 5 zombies on top of him then i will invisible .
DeleteIf I were a superhero my name would be Super Bert the midnight superhero and my powers would be I could fly, I was really clever, I could throw lightning balls, I would be really speedy and could go around the equator 10,000 times in 2 hours, I could make inventions really quickly like a time machine and my sidekick would be captain RansBottttom. And my enemy would be Dead Devil. And my greatest mission would be to save the world from Dead Devil and save the world from destruction. And whenever someone needs help they call me. And nobody knew I was a superhero only if they called for help.my parents just think I am an ordinary child. And grant wishes for people and me! And I was allergic to IXL (a boring maths app).
ReplyDeleteHaha, do you think superheroes have allergies? I'd never thought about that!
DeleteHow do you get to people when they need help? Could you use an adverb (-ly word) to start a sentence explaining?
they call me on the telephone in my room and i put it in my hand so it vibrates and i put it on silent so my parents dont hear it.
DeleteIf I was a superhero my name would be Super Yus the midnight Superhero however my powers would be to fly and whenever someone was in danger my orange and blue badge will start beeping. My enemy is called Captain doughnut pants who has this mysterios way of gluing buildings to cars .My sidekick is Mr banana who is disguised as a builder. The only way of stopping Captain doughnut pants is to co
ReplyDeleteHow do you stop Captain Doughnut Pants? It sounds exciting!
DeleteCould you use some time words to explain?
If I were a superhero
ReplyDeleteI would only be a winter superhero and my enemy would be Evilgogopants (David). My super powers are ice and snow (so I can freeze things), flite (so I can fly above Evilgogopants), laser eyes (so I don’t have to hold a weapon) and I can mind read. I have a cat side kick. My most important mission was when Evilgogopants dug a hole to the earth’s core and got out a rocket launcher and was just about to explode the earth when I grabbed it.
Wow. I would like the power of flight!
DeleteCan you explain to me what happened after you grabbed the rocket launcher? Perhaps you could use an adverb (-ly word) in the sentence when you explain?
If I were a superhero
ReplyDeleteI would take down superdodo and my name would be captain ransbottttom. My super identity would be unknown.It would be to shoot gooy webs that stick to anything and everything.I aussault bad guys and destroy there powers. It is never to difficult for captain ransbottttom.
Captain Ramsbottom sounds very super! Don't forget that he needs capital letters for his name.
DeleteWhat was Captain Ramsbottom's most dangerous mission? Coud you use some time connectives when you tell me?
First Captain ransbottttom found out that the evil superdodo was next night going to destroy the world. captain ransbottttom had to act fast. Straight away he set off to the superdodos place where he had chosen to set off the super bomb. When Captain ransbottttom got there the bomb was about to blow. Quik as a flash he stoped the bomb put it in a glass case and took it back to hq. He had saved the world from destruction.
DeleteIf I were a superhero
ReplyDeleteMy name would be called Ellie Wainwright the super cool midnight superhero. My sidekick would be the super sidekick called Graham Barber he would get to the scene first! His super power would be super-fast flying and. My super power is fighting my enemies and Grahams. My enemy is Tony Smith so one time I flew into his stomach then accidently he threw up on Gracie Macro the midnight superhero. The time after that I punched Tony in the face so hard that his blood went all over Gracie’s long thick hair I laughed so Gracie punched me and it shut me up. I would round the trying to find a problem in the world.
What a disgisting thing to happen to a superhero!
DeleteHow would you fly around the world? Could you write a sentence starting with an adverb to tell me?
Quickly I turn on my superpower and whoosh I'm off flying in outer space, my amazing sidekick Graham will give me a bit of his superpower so I can fly nearly as fast as him.
DeleteIf I were a superhero I would be called Gracie Macro the midnight superhero. My special superpower would be flying really high. My sidekick would be called Tony Smith and his superpower would be eating carrots! My enemy is called Graham Barber. So one time I flew into his fat face and punched him on the nose and stuffed as many carrots as I could into his massive mouth! Another time I flew to burning hot Australia and I forgot to put some sun cream on and got a massive sun burn and Graham Barber laughed at me so I punched him and that shut him up! He told on me like a little weeny baby, but he is really fat so I don’t know why I called him a little weeny baby. So instead I called him names.
ReplyDeleteDo you think most superheroes are friendly? I'm not sure I would feel all that safe if you came to rescue me!
DeleteCould you tell me about a time when you have helped people? Perhaps you could include something somebody said?
Well, one time there was a person who's house was robbed. So I smashed through the window and I luckily found some rotten sweets and chocolate in my pocket. Then I told the robbers to follow me and their eyes lit up at the sight of the sweets. I took them outside and I gave it to them, and then I rushed inside and helped the women and her cat, dog and fish called Tabby, Tommy and Timmy.
DeleteIf I were a superhero, I would save the world from destruction and I would be a night super hero. My name would be Miss Turquoise McClellan and I will fly everywhere especially when it is dark.
ReplyDeleteI will have a side kick called banana girl and a enemy how is from red called pink pants
Saving the world from destruction is an important job!
DeleteCan you explain how you would do it? Perhaps you could use because, but or so in your sentence.
If I was a superhero, my name would be super Sophie because I saved the world from a bomb. My power would be invisible and fly. No one would know I was a superhero. I flew up to the sun and blew up the bomb. I only am a superhero at night.
ReplyDeleteWow. What happened after you blew up the bomb? How did you feel?
DeleteCoud you use some connectives such as so, because or but in your answer?
If I was a superhero I would be called lightning boy. My superpowers would be throwing lightning ,harkens and torpedoes. I would be a school superhero. Noone knows I am a superhero except my side kicks miss Natras ,missis Penny and my dad. My worst enemy is called Professor Fishhead who tries to destroy the world with his poisonous fish heads which he launches out of a cannon. Then they hit somebody in the face and they turn them into evil silver fish which is the name of Professor Fishheads servants.
ReplyDeleteWow, I hope I have a good sidekick power to fight against the fish head servants! They sound horrible!
DeleteCould you write me a little description of what they look like and how they behave? Don't forget to use adjectives.
They are very stupid and they do exactly as the professor tells them. They also tern people in to silverfish.
Deletechompees. I F I WERE A SUPERHERO My name would be the Red Falcon.
ReplyDeleteMy superpower would be to fire bulits out of my suit and to fly really fast and to hide in trees .My side kick is called the green falcon. My enemy is Buggly. He always comes to destroy our nice, clean planet and he comes from the planet Jupiter. He wants to have the sun facing his dirty cold planet instead of ours! He also has evil demeans.
Theye have sharp teeth and green skin and pointe skales also there very small.
DeleteIt's important to look after our planet.
ReplyDeleteHow do you stop Buggly? Can you explain using some connectives? so, because, but...
Jude, check under last week's homework to find your comment!
ReplyDeleteMillie, check under our global conference pictures.
If I were a super hero I would be called Captain Doughnut Pants. By day I would relax in a hot tub. By night I defeat my arch enemy Evil Doughy Pants. I have a silly sidekick called sidekick doughnut pants. My super powers are my doughnut ray googles to see dough, my doughnut boxing gloves to beat up the baddies. My favourite weapon is my doughnut boomerang, I use it to knock my enemies over. My doughnut radar senses bad guys.
ReplyDeleteGreat super powers, Ollie!
DeleteWhat does Evil Doughy Pants look like? Could you use some adjectives to describe him?
Evil Doughy pants is so thin he can slip throo things.
DeleteWell done everyone
ReplyDeleteBea
well done i like them all
Deletekitty
These are all such amazing superheroes! Well done everyone.
ReplyDeleteIf I were a superhero I would have super powers to be super strong,to flyand to be invisible.
ReplyDeleteIf I were a superhero I would have powers to fly, to be invisible, to fly and to be super strong.
ReplyDeleteif i was a superhero i would be called Violetforde my super powers would be to shoot ice.My enermy would be could golden pans.the coler of my soot would be red.
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